Birthday poster

Only thing I wish to see done better is the Optimus Prime. You have good depth, and demension than once I saw him it killed the wow effect for me. You gave everyone else in the picture a lot of detail, and they seemed that they were there not just flat on paper. The detail you used was great. What I think would make it much better is if you gave Optimus Prime more depth. So he looks like the other robot on the left, or is given more of a body. You could for example make him soar by perhaps if that would be easy enough for you. But for the overall it is amazing. In adition to the fact that the colors are in together nicely and not having white specs all over them is something I havn't seen much. The cloud is amazing. Maybe adding another could help the atmosphere, or just making it smaller and adding one. The only other thing that really strikes out at me is the car. I don't know how to critique that, because my car drawings suck too when I try to make them. Really amazing for something I don't see much be done, and done well. In other words I love it! If you do ever make a revised one please do send me a note. I would appreciate it.